Mahabharat: Shiva's Last Variable
Chapter 153 - 151: Sage Veenadhara Singing... Challenge To The Face...
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When no doors opened...
When no villager answered his challenge...
When even his threats failed to lure anyone outside...
Sage Veenadhara Kashyap’s face darkened.
For several moments he stood silently in the middle of the road.
The flower-filled village remained quiet.
Not a single person emerged.
The sage’s eye twitched.
Then he let out a cold laugh.
"Fine."
His voice echoed through the empty streets.
"If words cannot bring them out..."
He slowly reached for the veena resting beside him.
"...then perhaps a song shall."
The villagers hiding inside their homes immediately groaned.
Several even buried their faces in their hands.
One elderly farmer muttered,
"Not again."
His wife sighed.
"At least this time he’s only singing."
Outside, Veenadhara gracefully sat beneath the massive banyan tree located near the center of the village.
The tree’s enormous branches stretched over much of the square.
Its shade normally served as a gathering place for villagers.
Today it had become the stage of an exceptionally irritated sage.
Veenadhara adjusted his robes.
Placed the veena upon his lap.
Closed his eyes.
Then his fingers moved.
The first notes floated through the air.
Beautiful.
Absolutely beautiful.
Even Devara had to admit it.
The sage’s mastery over music was genuine.
The melody danced through the flower fields.
It flowed between the houses.
It carried a rhythm that could easily captivate listeners.
Then the lyrics began.
And immediately the beauty vanished.
At least for anyone paying attention to the words.
"Oh hear me, people of Mallikavana..."
The sage sang.
His voice carried impressive power.
Yet every line dripped with contempt.
"You hide behind walls and doors..."
"You tremble before a wandering sage..."
His fingers moved skillfully across the strings.
The melody remained elegant.
The message did not.
"What courage lies within your hearts?"
"None."
"What wisdom fills your minds?"
"None."
The sage shook his head dramatically while singing.
His expression overflowing with disappointment.
"You fear a challenge."
"You fear a question."
"You fear a song."
The lyrics became increasingly harsh.
Inside their homes, villagers listened in silence.
Many had already heard similar songs before.
Yet somehow each version became worse.
The sage continued.
"Why burden the earth with such fearful lives?"
"Why walk beneath the sun if courage does not dwell within you?"
"If a simple challenge sends you running..."
"Then perhaps the wind possesses greater bravery."
Several villagers rolled their eyes.
One old grandmother muttered,
"The wind doesn’t have to listen to him every day."
Nearby, her grandson nearly laughed.
His mother immediately covered his mouth.
Outside, Veenadhara remained completely unaware.
Or perhaps he simply didn’t care.
The song continued.
Each verse growing more dramatic.
Each criticism becoming more exaggerated.
Eventually the melody shifted.
The tone changed.
Devara immediately noticed.
The criticism ended.
And something else began.
Self-praise.
A great deal of self-praise.
Far too much self-praise.
Veenadhara lifted his chin proudly.
His fingers danced across the strings.
The melody became grander.
More heroic.
More triumphant.
Almost as though he was introducing a legendary emperor.
Except...
He was singing about himself.
"I am Veenadhara..."
"The Crown of Music."
"The Ocean of Wisdom."
"The Voice that Silences Scholars."
"The Master before whom Poets Bow."
Shakuni’s fake moustache twitched dangerously.
Devara wisely pretended not to notice.
The sage continued to sing.
"The Conqueror of Riddles."
"The Lord of Melody."
"The Lamp of Knowledge."
"The Jewel of Learning."
Each title was delivered with complete sincerity.
Not a trace of embarrassment.
Not a trace of irony.
Veenadhara genuinely believed every word.
The song continued growing more absurd.
Several villagers hiding inside their homes began predicting the next title.
Unfortunately, many guessed correctly.
"The Mountain before which talent kneels."
"The Moon among thinkers."
"The Sun among artists."
"The Lion among sages."
One farmer sighed hearing all this words.
"He added three new titles."
His wife nodded after him.
"He always adds more when he’s angry."
Outside, Devara quietly listened.
His expression remained calm.
Yet a slight frown had appeared.
The king had expected arrogance.
Guru Durvasa’s letter had warned him.
But hearing it directly was something else entirely.
Then came the next verse.
The one that finally made Shakuni almost choke.
Veenadhara spread his arms dramatically.
"As long as the heavens endure..."
"My name should be remembered."
"The people should sing my praises."
"Morning."
"Afternoon."
"And evening."
The sage pointed toward the houses.
His voice booming across the village.
"Build me a temple."
The veena strings rang dramatically.
"Let songs of Veenadhara fill the air."
"Let future generations remember my greatness."
"Let children learn my verses before all others."
Inside the houses, several villagers looked utterly defeated.
One man whispered,
"Last month he only wanted a statue."
His friend sighed.
"The demands are evolving."
Even Devara had to look away for a moment.
Not because he was angry.
Because he was trying very hard not to laugh.
Shakuni noticed it too.
Unfortunately that only made it harder for him.
The minister coughed.
Twice.
-Cough! -Cough!
Then suddenly became fascinated by a nearby clay pot.
Meanwhile, beneath the banyan tree, Veenadhara finished another grand verse praising himself.
The final note echoed through the village.
The sage opened one eye.
Waiting.
Expecting applause.
Admiration. Perhaps awe.
Instead... Silence.
Complete silence.
"...."
"...."
"...."
No doors opened. No windows moved.
Not a single villager emerged.
A flower petal drifted past.
Somewhere in the distance a cow mooed.
That was all.
The sage’s eyebrow twitched.
"...."
Again. Then again.
Devara watched from atop the bullock cart.
The king’s frown deepened slightly.
Not because the sage was talented.
He clearly was.
Not because the sage was knowledgeable.
That too was obvious.
The problem was simpler.
Veenadhara had spent so long admiring his own reflection that he no longer noticed anyone else.
And that...
More than any curse.
More than any enemy.
Was the very arrogance Guru Durvasa had sent Devara here to cure.
The final notes of Veenadhara’s song slowly faded into the evening air.
The sage remained seated beneath the great banyan tree.
His fingers rested upon the strings of his veena.
A self-satisfied smile lingered on his face.
Though the villagers had not emerged from their homes, he wasn’t particularly concerned.
In his mind, they were listening.
They had heard every word.
Every verse. Every title.
Every reminder of his greatness.
That alone was enough to soothe his pride.
At least for the moment.
Then something caught his attention.
Movement.
A bullock cart.
His eyes immediately shifted toward the road leading through the village.
The same cart he had briefly noticed earlier.
Until now he had paid little attention to it.
After all, merchants were common.
Most avoided him after hearing his reputation.
But these two had remained in the village.
Even after the warning bell.
Even after everyone else had hidden.
More importantly... They were driving directly toward him.
Sage Veenadhara’s eyes brightened.
A hopeful smile slowly spread across his face.
At last.
Finally.
A challenger.
His disappointment from earlier immediately vanished.
He stood up so quickly that his robes fluttered around him.
The veena was slung over his shoulder.
His posture straightened.
His confidence returned.
The villagers peeking through tiny gaps in their windows immediately noticed.
Several groaned.
"Oh no."
"He’s found new victims."
"Poor fellows."
One old woman folded her hands.
"May the gods protect those merchants."
Meanwhile, the bullock cart continued moving.
Slowly.
Calmly.
The two merchants seemed completely unaware of the danger approaching them.
Or at least that was what Veenadhara believed.
The sage began walking toward the road.
His excitement visibly growing.
The closer the cart came, the more convinced he became that destiny had finally provided him with worthy entertainment.
Soon he reached the middle of the path.
The cart continued approaching.
The bulls suddenly became uneasy.
Their ears flattened. Their pace slowed.
The animals seemed uncomfortable around the sage for some reason.
Devara noticed it too.
So did Shakuni.
Neither commented.
Finally the cart reached the banyan tree.
Sage Veenadhara confidently stepped directly into its path.
The bullock cart came to a halt.
One of the bulls snorted loudly.
The other pawed at the ground.
The sage paid them no attention.
His eyes remained fixed on Devara.
The disguised king sat casually atop the cart.
One hand resting upon a stack of pottery.
His enormous fake moustache looked particularly magnificent in the evening light.
Beside him, Shakuni adjusted his own disguise while trying not to smile.
Veenadhara lifted his chin proudly.
Then pointed directly at Devara.
The gesture was dramatic enough to make it seem as though he was declaring war.
His voice boomed across the empty village.
"You!"
Devara blinked being pointed at.
"...."
Then looked behind himself.
The sage’s eyebrow twitched.
"Yes, you!"
Devara looked around again.
Then pointed at himself.
"Me?"
Veenadhara nodded proudly.
-Nod!
"Indeed."
The sage took another step forward.
"You have looked upon my face."
Technically true.
Devara had looked at his face.
Shakuni had as well.
Veenadhara smiled with a knowing look.
The smile of a man who believed events were unfolding exactly as they should.
"Therefore..."
He spread his arms dramatically. 𝓯𝓻𝒆𝙚𝒘𝓮𝙗𝓷𝒐𝓿𝙚𝒍.𝙘𝓸𝙢
"I challenge you."
The villagers listening from inside their homes sighed collectively.
Here we go again.
Sage Veenadhara continued.
"A contest of riddles."
"A competition of intellect."
"A battle of wisdom."
His smile widened.
"Should you defeat me, I shall acknowledge your talent."
The sage paused.
Then added confidently,
"Though such a thing has never happened."
Shakuni almost laughed.
Devara remained calm.
The sage folded his arms.
"Well?"
His eyes gleamed.
He was already imagining the outcome.
The merchant would accept.
The merchant would fail.
The merchant would be humiliated.
The merchant would learn of Veenadhara’s greatness.
Everything would proceed as usual.
After all...
Nobody refused Sage Veenadhara.
At least not successfully.
Then Devara spoke.
His tone was casual. Almost lazy.
"No."
Silence.
"...."
"...."
"...."
The entire village seemed to stop breathing.
Sage Veenadhara blinked. Once. Twice.
Surely he had misheard.
"What?"
Devara adjusted a clay pot. Then repeated himself.
"No."
The sage stared at him as if he had told something which is nearly impossible.
Devara continued to speak.
"I don’t want to."
Silence. Absolute silence.
"...."
"...."
"...."
Inside the nearby houses, villagers froze.
Several people pressed closer to their windows.
Did he just... Did he really...
Sage Veenadhara remained motionless.
His mind struggled to process what had happened.
For years... Many years...
People had accepted his challenges.
Some eagerly. Some reluctantly.
Some fearfully. But they accepted at last.
Nobody simply refused.
Not like this. Not so casually. Not so directly.
Not as though the challenge itself wasn’t worth considering.
The sage pointed at himself.
"Do you know who I am?"
Devara nodded his head obvious.
-Nod!
"You are the fellow who was singing about himself."
A few villagers immediately covered their mouths.
Shakuni lowered his head.
His shoulders started shaking.
Sage Veenadhara’s eye twitched violently.
The sage tried again.
"I am Sage Veenadhara Kashyap."
Devara nodded again not intrested.
-Nod!
"Good for you."
Another twitch.
The villagers were now fighting for survival.
Not from fear. From laughter.
Sage Veenadhara took a deep breath.
Surely the merchant simply didn’t understand.
"You have looked upon my face."
"I challenged you."
Devara nodded once again maintaining his composure.
"Yes."
"Then accept."
"No."
The answer came instantly.
Like a hammer.
The sage stood frozen.
For the first time in years...
Possibly decades...
Someone had rejected him without hesitation.
Without fear. Without respect.
Without even the slightest interest.
The worst part? The merchant didn’t seem angry.
Didn’t seem intimidated. Didn’t seem impressed.
He simply looked like a man who had been offered extra work and politely declined.
Sage Veenadhara stared at him.
Completely stunned.
And somewhere inside the nearby houses...
A villager accidentally laughed too loudly.
Then immediately slammed the window shut.
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