Guys I have been busy with life, work, trying to find my future wife and all these things. As I work in a stressful job, sometimes I really just come here to relax by reading a story. All that to say that the rewrite I promised was not actually done. I had initially planned to delete what was up and redeploy some new Chapters, but then I thought there are so many Chapters up if I take them down it’d gonna be much shorter so I didnt.

Anyways it has come to my attention via poor reviews that the first Chapters are confusing and unsatisfying so I would like to ask you input via comments.

Do you want me to take down the Chapters 1-30 and have Chapters 31 going forward start the story as a rewrite?:

YES Take down the original Chapters

NO Don’t Take Down the original Chapters