Joshua Calderon

Joshua Calderon

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it was good at the start but as it goes on it becomes so stupid that it will annoy you. typical MC being stupid naive kind protagonist who I recall is an adult graduated college student from modern age but didn`t even use one bit of good advance knowledge learn in his reincarnation.

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SexyKitty21
2 years ago

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Do mantis lay eggs? 
his famous and strong lets talk sh** about him in his face.
ohh he is so handome even though he is wearing a mask.
ohh I can see half of his face even though he is wearing a mask.

the novel is good but the translation is bad as in dumb bad sh** translation. You can still understand it but it is so annoying that I want to correct everything.

starting from 1000 chapter up you notice it becoming stale even before this 1000 mark then it becaomes rush then just ending up nonsense just throwing things that barely or non-existing common sense that destroy the story build up. Wasted my time.

I am stoping at chapter one for
1. tortoise canlay eggs say MC?(yes and he says its a male though but why as if tortoise lays eggs?)
2.She was the Emperor of the Nine Phoenix Dynasty.... emperor is a she?
3.the novel is one of the mass produce novels... perhaps made by an AI
need alot of fixing if say so

meh it started good but somehow it keeps getting annoying of how much ILLOGICAL the antoganist can be. like he just killed one girl(just above average girl not perfect) and the whole world is after him... wtf what did he kill just a random mob. And it started by the demoness to feeding him a two way poison for no reason and everyone decided to bully him. overall it`s good but the progression stop when it repeatedly keep the same scenario all over again yes he grows stronger but did he improve the story no just another cycle again with absurd amount of unknown reason of hatred for the mc. so MEHHHH I`ll drop it at 271.

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