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... thing is... I have been receiving some comments and reviews (s) as well about the story being abrupt.

I accept that the initial phase, which undoubtedly is the most crucial one, is rushed and less worded.

My bad.

It's actually the effect of another story I have been writing alongside this one that affected my writing style.

This content is taken from freeweɓnovel.cѳm.

I just jumped from scene to scene with less to no proper introduction to the characters an ...

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Netizen: It’s over, it’s over, Dingliu wakes up so angry, he will definitely curse

Tuanzi: Second brother, Miaomiao is very hungry, can you cook for Miaomiao?

Top stream: coming soon

Netizen: This is not the top stream I know!

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Netizen: Top class black history, take a screenshot quickly

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Netizen: Hurry up and take a screenshot of Miao Miao Heroine’s highlight moment!

Scene 3: Children collect ingredients in the village

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Netizen: So you are such a top class!

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