MTL - Di Wang Gong Lue-~ Introduction to the Emperor Raiders (Lang Xiaoshan)

Born in the royal family, Chu Yuan was frightened by every move, for fear that he would be inadvertently lost.

At the age of eighteen, he was enthroned. In the first half of the year, Yunnan will cause civil strife. Although the minds of the old ministers are not the same, they are waiting to see how the new emperor will end. Unexpectedly, this time has not come to the sound, thousands of miles away, the southwestern section of the white moon has already personally killed the Quartet, and it will be messed up after half a year.

The moon shadow in the palace is sparse, Chu Yuan personally dropped the fire paint, and sent the secret letter 800 miles to Yunnan.

With a pen-powered paper back, I can almost see how angry the young emperor was when writing this line.

Duan Baiyue slowly spread the paper, only one word was returned.

you.

Content tag: The powerful court Marquis has a special liking

The protagonist: Chu Yuan, Duan Baiyue supporting role: Duan Yao, Ye Wei, Shen Qianfeng┃ Others: Jianghu series, language laughter, bandit Raiders, Emperor Wen, HE

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The first time I read the lyrics of Xiaoshan was the famous "The President's Cool Mania", and then I saw her "Mr. Fashion". The impression of her work is that the style is easy and the language is closely followed. Fashion trends, vulgar but not annoying, can tell the story round but the story itself is not particularly innovative, belonging to a new bottle of old wine well-dressed author. And "The Emperor Raiders" made me feel another advantage of her - the context is very clear.

I first read the "Turk Raiders" and then "The Emperor Raiders". In the past two days, I added the two previous series of rivers and lakes. The order of story development is the rivers and lakes, the local tyrants, and the bandits. Then the emperor Raiders stringed together the timelines of the first three, and from another angle, took the reader through the story for more than a decade. Since the emperor's strategy is a string, the author's concept of time is very test. I always think that telling a story is a basic professional accomplishment of a writer. It is a basic need for a complete story to make the story timeline clear. However, it may be that I have read too few series of texts. I always feel that I can meet the requirements too little. I have seen the most outrageous ones when I was 17 years old, and the second one became 21 years old.

Before I saw some authors on Weibo discussing whether to write an outline, many authors said that they would not write and write which ones. I think it may also be because everyone who says that they don't write an outline estimate is also embarrassed to admit the author, but it should be mostly true. After all, no one forces you to admit it. As for the authors who have read the works, most of the works that do not write the outline are amazing, but there is one feature - unfinished tails, which are also written from my high school and are still not finished yet, and most of the works of the outline are written. They are all in the middle of the rules, but they all have their beginnings and ends.

As far as the "Emperor Raiders" is concerned, I think the author must have listed a very clear timeline and what happened at what time. Because "The Emperor Raiders" happened in the background of the first three books, and if the big events that occurred in the first three books will inevitably arouse the readers' resentment, they must write new stories and cannot conflict with the first three books. It is very difficult. Surprisingly, after I took the magnifying glass and looked at the previous plot, I still couldn’t find any big bugs. I can basically justify it, even the NPC took care of it. For example, the second Liu Xiang, who was copied by the emperor, is here. The time period that appears in this book is still there, and he has disappeared after the second timeline. This level of detail is very touching and touching.

Of course, this is not to say that this plot design is perfect. For example, the middle section of Wang Ye retired for three years + later healed for one year. These four years are not so much abusive readers, but rather to take care of the structure of the first three books. Abuse of the readers. The author of the general series did not think too much about the role of the protagonist in the first time when writing the first book. Duan Wangye’s appearance rate is very small, and the second one is basically not mentioned, so Duan Wangye’s second occurrence occurred. It is best to disappear in the timeline, and the two people in the bandit Raiders seem to be very unfamiliar, so they still have to find an opportunity to quarrel, so that the section of Wang Ye to retreat is the best. If there are no restrictions on the first three books, this independent book will not take so long. Of course, if there is no congenital deficiency condition of the “first three restrictions”, I may not evaluate it as high.

This book seems to be very long, but it is not particularly long. After dinner at night, I will watch it in two nights. The story feels long because the two lines are mixed together, and no detail is wasted, so I feel that the plot is very rich. At the beginning, it was the king's poison line, and then I found the antidote. I haven't seen all kinds of sorrows for a few years. Originally, according to the design of an independent novel, I went to Nanyang to find the antidote, and the end of the villain can be finished. But at this time, I didn't go to the bandit timeline, and the two people in the bandit had not yet made a positive result, so I could only let the villain live for a few more years. It was originally a drug that was stolen. The Emperor Wenli explained why the reason for not attacking Nanyang at this time was that the battle was very heavy at this time, and it also analyzed the situation at that time. By the way, it was a foreshadowing of the Tokai in the bandit Raiders. It seems that the whole series is very complete, as if there really is such a world. same.

There is nothing in the character image. Unlike the author's other works, the protagonist cp, the past works are actually very strong, but the appearance is a weak lotus, and this show is really strong. In the first two books, the emperor appeared in a calm and rational, killing and decisive image. Every act has a purpose, and the appearance is to send a lunch. At the time of the third author, I should have opened a document for him, making him a little more accessible, but still daunting. Don't say that the protagonist in the text is against him. When I look at the bandit Raiders, I have been worried that the emperor knows that the big family is the royal blood and will kill the big master. When I arrived at this book, it might be that Xi Shi was in the eyes of the lover. In front of Duan Wang, the emperor finally had the smoldering spirit of the people, and would be happy if he would lose his temper. Duan Wangye’s attack in the works of Xiaoxiao’s works is also a wonderful thing in the wind. It is not arrogant and not overbearing. The first night of the first kiss is the emperor’s initiative. He was injured and feared that the emperor was still desperately concealing himself. He was seriously injured and hid. The plate was smashed one by one. It can be said that this pair is the favorite pair in the novel I have seen this year.

The supporting role is still a shortcoming of the author, that is, the original character is flat. Like this long article, Xiaobai, the author's own positioning is that everyone looks at the music, even if you are the protagonist in another article, you can only retain one or two characteristics when you play the supporting role, such as Ye Hao's proud, warm The eloquence of adults, as for the confederate and the big master, the name can not tell who is who. The addition of several supporting roles is not bad. I love to cry in love with the skirts of the little prince, the gift of the very pottery of the South Master, Dazhi Ruoyu Liu Daren.

In terms of language, it is still very humorous and funny, but there is no previous nonsense. Because the protagonist's setting is more serious, so the psychological activities are still a bit more funny, the words and deeds are very serious, the funny task of the whole play is basically given to the supporting role. In the future, the author can consider writing such an easy and serious ancient text, and look at the potential.

Overall evaluation: In terms of content, the author's standard is as always, can write out the contents of the framework, express the expressed emotions, and the framework design is very rigorous, it should be extra points, I think the whole five-star rating is not too much, Recommended.