MTL - Manga Guidebook-Chapter 44 fail?

Chen Zijun handed him the sketch of "Shape of Sound" in his hand.

Taking it over, Shi Zihe was not polite, and opened it directly to take a look.

The first is the name - "Shape of Sound", and then I quickly browsed it. The first editor will not read the plot, but first browse the painting style and the most basic places. I feel that it is similar, and there is hope. Start watching the drama.

Compared with the anxiety in the newcomer period, Chen Zijun didn't feel any tension in his heart, only calm.

These two episodes have already begun to show the plot of "Shape of Sound". After all, each episode has more than 40 pages. The beginning of the story starts from the male protagonist Ishida Masahiro who met Nishinomiya Glass, who was born with hearing impairment in sixth grade, and will He also rejected her very much. In order to liberate from the boring life, he began to play tricks on her, which led to Nishimiya Glass's transfer.

This is the previous plot.

Chen Zijun's rhythm was drawn with the animation version, but it did not make the progress very fast. This is because the animation version of the previous life had to cut down and condense the plot of the comic version due to the limitation of time, which is quite fast. When it was about to collapse, Chen Zijun complained in his heart that after the release of The Shape of the Voice in the previous life, there were often only 129 minutes of animation, and even 20 minutes were cut off by Radio and Television. There are many major plots cut off. where the plot is incoherent.

If you don't show this, it's better not to show it if you get cut off and lose word of mouth.

Therefore, when Chen Zijun drew, he slowed down the speed of the plot and enlarged the level of detail.

Shi Zihe watched it for the second time to tell the truth, and the speed was not slow. Basically, he read a page very quickly. It seemed that they had already exercised their speed.

"Well...this is the plot." Shi Zihe had a hard time deciding. The painting skills were okay, and it was obvious that he was very careful. The best thing to look at was the style of the characters, which made Shi Zihe like it very much. This is the plot... Shi Zihe has been an editor for many years, and most of the comics basically know whether there is potential at first glance, but in this regard, he can't help but hesitate. There is no problem with the style of painting, and the plot is fine.

This is not a so-called hot-blooded romance, nor a romantic romance, but a story about a bully, and it was carried out by the protagonist. In Shi Zihe's eyes, this kind of behavior is very difficult. To please, no no no, it can be said to be an act of death.

The plot of the comic is very important, and the behavior of the protagonist is also the most important part. This behavior is not the protagonist, but the behavior of the villain.

"That... Mr. Zijun, I still feel that your works are of high quality, but have you ever thought about changing the plot?"

"Change?"

"Yes." Shi Zihe explained: "It's just to let some supporting characters unfold the character of Ba Ling, the protagonist to rescue, and make the new heroine like this kind of plot. Your handling of this setting is a little blunt, and the readers The look and feel of the movie is not very good, so I think it can be changed appropriately. If you change it to such a similar plot, I dare to say that there is definitely a high possibility of serialization. "

"Editor Shi Zihe, you read the outline just now. When I designed the plot, Ishida General and Nishinomiya Glass were on the road of mutual redemption. What you said is completely different." Chen Zijun said with a slight frown.

"The outline itself can be changed according to the situation, and I am indeed making a suggestion for your work. If you don't change it, to be honest, it is impossible to serialize at all." Shi Zihe persuaded: "Current readers They are all quite sensitive, but your protagonist has also designed this kind of plot, so I don’t think there is any hope of serialization, please modify it slightly.”

"Is there really no way?"

"Although I have the right to submit it, I think it is useless to submit it, so please consider what I just said."

Shi Zihe left Chen Zijun to think.

It seems that his words are indeed a good suggestion, but after thinking about it for a moment, Chen Zijun does not intend to revise it.

There are two reasons. One is that this is not his own work. He just copied it in this world. Although the details can be modified, the main line of the story is still forgotten. The second is that he does not have the ability to create excellent stories. Maybe There will be in the future, but now Chen Zijun does not have it.

"I'm sorry, I'll take my leave first." Seeing that he didn't agree with this story, Chen Zijun was not angry or anything. Who stipulated that a story would be successful in a different world? Attack on Titan was rejected by the young IUMP, not to mention the current Chen Zijun.

"Young people today." Shi Zihe shook his head slightly. His insistence on independent personality looks good, but he is too inflexible. His opinions are based on his own experience. 80% of the people who will be defeated by reality will only realize how naive they were back then.

As an editor, he has already put forward his own opinions, and it is his problem to revise it or not.

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Chen Zijun walked out of the reception hall and out of the building, he couldn't help but let out a sigh of relief~www.novelbuddy.com~ turned around and glanced at the building, at this time, he couldn't help but remember Gong Shaoyuan, a newcomer who edited it. Hurt.

In a big publishing house, the editor is completely different from before.

But no matter what, since Miaobi Magazine is no longer available, I have to change it.

Now, only Zijin comics magazine is left to try it out. If this doesn't work, then Chen Zijun can only consider the possibility of changing the story.

I took a taxi to the headquarters of Zijin Comic Magazine. As a well-known large-scale magazine in Jingnai City, the headquarters is a small three-story office building, but it is very clean. A stark contrast was formed.

Chen Zijun was a little hesitant, because he had never made an appointment to go inside, so he didn't know whether to let him in or not, but he came here, so he had to go in and lie down, so he couldn't leave empty-handed.

Walking inside, I came to the front desk. The front desk was a very delicate girl. Seeing Chen Zijun, he greeted him, "Hello, sir, can I help you?"

"Hello, I'm here to contribute comics. I don't have an appointment. Could you please help me make an appointment with an editor who has spare time?"

"Of course you can, please sit here and wait, I'll make an appointment for you right away."

"Thank you." Hearing this, Chen Zijun sat on a sofa by the door and waited patiently.

The lady at the front desk picked up the phone and called,

"Editor Su Jing, hello, it's like this, someone has come to make an appointment."

"Yes, it's downstairs, yes, please."

Hanging up the phone, Chen Zijun also walked over appropriately.

"Sir, just wait for your author to wait at the entrance of the editing room on the second floor."

"Excuse me." Chen Zijun thanked him.